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- Based on the evidence I’ve provided in the draft for Project 3, my peers believe that I should continue to develop a relationship between Boyer and Carter. While my paper briefly touches upon the similarities there is still some evidence that was left out that could be added. Make a link. How do they challenge eachother?
- As for the introduction, my peers believe that I have enough information given for Boyer and Carter but I can add some more information for the nursing major and its enrichment in my opening paragraph.
- For evidence I think it would be helpful for me to integrate more quotes. I already have a decent amount but it would help build a stronger paper by adding more where I am able to.
