Throughout writing both the draft and final of Project 3, I think I made some pretty good improvements throughout the writing process. One thing I did not change much of was my introduction. With the help of my writing lab instructor Katie I learned how to create really strong introductions and both her as well as my fellow peers who reviewed my paper agreed that I had a strong introduction. The main thing I changed in my paper was my thesis. At first my thesis was short and weak and it was difficult to locate where it was in my paper. I was able to expand my thesis a few sentences and make it easier to locate. I also made some small changes throughout my writing, but I feel as if I do not have many good examples of them and they’re too minor to be displayed anyways.